So this is an attempt at a sims series ... Its called "Rory xo"
You have to watch it to get what its about



Please watch it!!!

Episode One:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yFzkoPCs48k
Episode One of "Rory xo" Still not too great but please give it a chance!!



xxx thanks ... Aciseg

A very good start - i can see this will evolve into an interesting story!
Its very original I must say so
Keep going!

That was really good, I love that more and more Sims 3 series are coming out!

Thanks, hopefully I'll be able to keep it going

I love that new sims 3 series are being made and especially good and original ones!

xx Aciseg

It Great!

Wow! I'm excited to see this! :D

Thanks hopefully the first ep will be out soon

First Episode is out! Already working on episode 2 so it doesn't seem so dull...Hopefully people will watch it and it will get decent storylines...

Any suggestions?

aaaaaah thats really good :D
I liked the flashback bit ;D

Just one little bit of advice (and its probably just me because i'm special) But I occasionally got lost at who was talking (especially when the three people in the office were talking... Maybe its because i'm a slow reader ;D
Can't wait to see the next bit ;D

Also - i know you can't fix it now - but you made a spelling mistake you put 'made' instead of 'mad' when they were talking about the father being mad at her :P

GOOD WORK ;D

I know...I tried to make it obvious but even I got confused occassionally! Hence the many many many times they say Rorys name when theyre speaking to her

I noticed the spelling mistake after i uploaded it too... must be more careful ... I also spelt opportunity wrong once don't tell people
Thanks x

Just a hint about the speech thing
You could change colours between who's speaking, like Rory could have purple and her boss could have green for example?
Just a suggestion :)

Hey,
Here are some things I would have done differently (you don't need to listen to me, i'm no expert, maybe you could find these useful):

Camera angles: When people are talking, I would focus more on their faces, that would help me to know who is talking, and I can get more familiar with the characters as I can see their faces in more detail. In some shots (specifically 1:46-1:57) you couldn't see their faces at all. Use the occasional wide-shot to show off your excellent set-design skills.

Subtitles: You already know about trying to make it easier for viewers to know who is saying what. If I were you I would take care to make sure that all the subtitles have correct spelling and grammar. Most of it is all good but there are quite a few spelling mistakes and missing apostrophe's (arent instead of aren't etc).

Hope this helps, ignore if you don't think so.

Thanks for the help...I'll attempted to do all them